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The Loneliest

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Spider webs
On cracked ceilings;
Or cobwebs
On cracked floors.
The latter seems more lonely
Than it ever did before.

Dusty nails and liquor
Spilled on windowsills;
In light or in deep darkness
You can see it
Slowly kill.

Laundry hanging off the door
That’s hanging off its hinges;
Remnants of the late late nights
Of broken-hearted binges.

A deep handful of wishes and a
Rotting body on the floor;
The latter
Seems more lonely
Than it ever did before.
:) This is not actually a good poem, it is a SILLY poem, which was very fun to write!! = D
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I know I've already commented on this and all but I wanted to comment again because I LIKE IT A LOT. The other day I was on my trampoline (haha) and I was thinking about it so I had to go read it again, and that's happened about three times, so it's definitely one of my favourites.